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Bubbles Wrap World by ~Just-Lizzie:iconJust-Lizzie:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Narrative > Open


Extending for acres
With a variety indeed
Each capsule filled with air

With life

Easily broken
Destroyed
And never to be repaired
Never to be avenged

By the millions
Surrounding it
Millions staying in their places
Conforming

And in the hands
Of an unsuitable being
Goes a pop!

Releasing the air
That rightfully belonged
To the planet it was taken from

And with each pop!
Returns the soul
Of a trapped angel
Yearning to fly back

Back to where they belong
©2009 ~Just-Lizzie
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~DarkOfThree Oct 24, 2009, 12:33:21 AM
I like the idea at the end, about the angels.
Interesting description of bubbles as capsules.

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~kittylvr619 Nov 8, 2009, 8:33:28 PM
oh, that's wonderful x3
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~Just-Lizzie Nov 9, 2009, 1:29:47 AM
Youre pretty wonderful yourself :D

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~kittylvr619 Nov 9, 2009, 2:24:28 PM
oh, you flatter me x3
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=th3krimzon1 Nov 9, 2009, 2:25:08 PM
Wow.

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~Just-Lizzie Nov 9, 2009, 4:48:11 PM
Not even close to it!

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*But My Dreams Go Unnoticed. Only For Now.*
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~ImTooCuteForThis Nov 10, 2009, 4:54:57 AM
i think that's really good @_@

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...:unimpressed: wow.
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*BellaEzrebetFang Nov 10, 2009, 7:32:52 AM
love it. It has a very different feel to it that is unique like....hm....some kind of POP that sparks my attention. :giggle:

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now they drag me off in pieces." - elle-sophicles
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"I will make pilgrims of my fingers,"
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